The comic im doing is a story About an adopted boy who is on his adventure to find who his parents are so he can see them and know why they sent him to the orphanage.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Jodecy
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your work on your comic strip so far. Your plot sounds very interesting and I look forward to seeing the final work. Next time, be sure to check your post for capital letters and full stops to improve your writing overall.
- Miss Birtch